From abacc51eeedb3392c18bfd6602481008fa998c74 Mon Sep 17 00:00:00 2001
From: Felix Fietkau <nbd@openwrt.org>
Date: Sun, 18 Feb 2007 16:46:46 +0000
Subject: add documentation fixes from #1285

git-svn-id: svn://svn.openwrt.org/openwrt/trunk@6319 3c298f89-4303-0410-b956-a3cf2f4a3e73
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 docs/adding.tex | 16 ++++++++--------
 1 file changed, 8 insertions(+), 8 deletions(-)

(limited to 'docs/adding.tex')

diff --git a/docs/adding.tex b/docs/adding.tex
index 34e13aea57..2695a764fb 100644
--- a/docs/adding.tex
+++ b/docs/adding.tex
@@ -121,15 +121,15 @@ Scroll over the firmware to find printable words that can be significant.
 
 \subsubsection{Amount of flash memory}
 
-Linux can hardly fit in a 2MB flash device, once you have open the device and 
-located the flash chip, try to find other the Internet its characteristics. If
+Linux can hardly fit in a 2MB flash device, once you have opened the device and 
+located the flash chip, try to find its characteristics on the Internet. If
 your flash chip is a 2MB or less device, your device is most likely to run a 
 proprietary OS such as WindRiver VxWorks, or a custom manufacturer OS like Zyxel ZynOS.
 
-OpenWrt does not currently run on devices which have equal or less than 2MB of 
-flash memory. This limitation will probably not be worked around since those 
-devices are most of the time micro routers, or Wireless Access Points, which are
-not the main OpenWrt target.
+OpenWrt does not currently run on devices which have 2MB or less of flash memory.
+This limitation will probably not be worked around since those devices are most 
+of the time micro-routers, or Wireless Access Points, which are not the main 
+OpenWrt target.
 
 \subsubsection{Pluging a serial port}
 
@@ -140,8 +140,8 @@ easily notice if the device uses a Linux kenrel or something different.
 \subsection{Finding and using the manufacturer SDK}
 
 Once you are sure your device run a Linux based firmware, you will be able to start
-hacking on it. If the manufacturer respect the GPL, it will have release with the 
-device, a Sample Development Kit.
+hacking on it. If the manufacturer respected the GPL, it will have released a Sample
+Development Kit with the device.
 
 \subsubsection{GPL violations}
 
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