From 0325b9db79ac5f96edfee53b7b2f57eef6d7fc5b Mon Sep 17 00:00:00 2001 From: Paul Kehrer Date: Thu, 24 Dec 2015 19:19:59 -0600 Subject: update docs with review feedback --- docs/x509/reference.rst | 24 ++++++++++++------------ 1 file changed, 12 insertions(+), 12 deletions(-) diff --git a/docs/x509/reference.rst b/docs/x509/reference.rst index 0697e636..859bc838 100644 --- a/docs/x509/reference.rst +++ b/docs/x509/reference.rst @@ -804,27 +804,27 @@ X.509 Certificate Revocation List Builder .. method:: last_update(time) - Sets the CRL's activation time. This is the time from which - clients can start trusting the CRL. It may be different from - the time at which the CRL was created. This is also known as the + Sets this CRL's activation time. This is the time from which + clients can start trusting this CRL. It may be different from + the time at which this CRL was created. This is also known as the ``thisUpdate`` time. - :param time: The :class:`datetime.datetime` object (in UTC) that marks the - activation time for the CRL. The CRL may not be trusted if it is - used before this time. + :param time: The :class:`datetime.datetime` object (in UTC) that marks + the activation time for this CRL. The CRL may not be trusted if it + is used before this time. .. method:: next_update(time) - Sets the CRL's next update time. This is the time by which - a new CRL will be issued. The next CRL could be issued before this - , but it will not be issued any later than the indicated date. + Sets this CRL's next update time. This is the time by which + a new CRL will be issued. The CA is allowed to issue a new CRL before + this date, however clients are not required to check for it. - :param time: The :class:`datetime.datetime` object (in UTC) that marks the - next update time for the CRL. + :param time: The :class:`datetime.datetime` object (in UTC) that marks + the next update time for this CRL. .. method:: sign(private_key, algorithm, backend) - Sign the CRL using the CA's private key. + Sign this CRL using the CA's private key. :param private_key: The :class:`~cryptography.hazmat.primitives.asymmetric.rsa.RSAPrivateKey`, -- cgit v1.2.3